This painting was submitted by John Burrows of Burrows Art. The paintings on John’s site are oils, so I assume this is also an oil painting.
Feel free
I’ve decided to critique each entry before I decide on a winner. Feel free to disagree (or agree) with my comments. Just remember that it is not my intention to offend anyone.
First the good news
I find the overall feeling of John’s painting (above) to be harmonious and pleasing (the same goes for the paintings on his site), and I think the suggestion of rain ads fluidity and a sense of environment.
Now some other news
The painting lacks depth. This might not be a problem as the artist’s intention may be to simply capture a certain impression or feeling that doesn’t need depth to impart. I can live with that, though with bonsai, depth is important.
The hard part
Fortunately (or maybe not), John submitted the photo (below) that inspired the painting. From a bonsai perspective, the most interesting and problematic details have been left out. These are the deadwood and exposed roots at the tree’s base. That whole part of the tree is a magnificent jumble that tells a story and gives the tree character. Without it, it lacks age and loses it’s links to its wild roots (in both senses).
The contest
It’s not to too late to enter (today is the last day) and win a $50 gift certificate to Stone Lantern. Go for it!
Dear Wayne,
Great comments and a very valid critique. My type of art is impressionistic which minimizes detail, is strong graphically and as you said imparts an essence rather than absolutes. The dry brush technique is also meant to minimize detail and gives it the “rain” effect. It is probably not a style that woudld suit most bonsai masters but I thought I’d submit anyway. You are totally right about the deadwood, which shows up much better on the actual painting. The fault is my lacking ability in digital photography. Regardless I am flattered that you posted it so prominently. Your blog does all of us bonsai enthusiasts a great service. Thank you again. John
Nice work, Dont know if it needs the “detail” of the deadwood / roots. The fogginess of the style adds a sense of nostalgia which cant replace it but more so changes the meaning.
I like the idea of these critiques!